| Title: Chapter 1
| 19 Jul 2010 9:00 am
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| Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous)
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Awesome beginning! Can't wait for more!
I love this story. :) I read it on fanfiction.net and I am so glad to see it here on Potions and Snitches!
I went and fixed the double spacing in the chapter for you, and fixed some punctuation, such as using quotation marks (") instead of apostrophes (') for speech.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 19 Jul 2010 6:12 am
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| Reviewer: Vulpixer (Anonymous)
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Yay! Sev just had his whole world turned on it's head! Go super studying Harry! Woooo! Post those Post-its! Lol Great start to the story. I can't wait for more. ^_^
I'm so glad you're posting this here too. It's ironic...I've just been reviewing your story on FF.N, but I'll review here too.
I have to admit that I've been a bad reader...I've really loved this story for some time, but just haven't gotten around to reviewing before now. I'm really sorry about that. I usually do try to review stories that I enjoy, but it's been a busy summer.
Anyway, I'll have to make up for that. I love your characters, the insight into Severus and Harry, and your Hufflepuffs, too. I like that Severus has that strong protective streak and a good heart underneath his stern exterior. I like how Harry is strong, despite his vulnerabilities, and that you have made him a conscientious (sp?) student. I like how Severus came to see and accept that he was wrong about Harry and is taking such good care of him.
It's a wonderful beginning to a wonderful story!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 19 Jul 2010 5:58 am
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| Reviewer: Anon #37 (Anonymous)
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Good premise, well-written, please continue!
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