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Reviews For Perception is Everything
I am really looking forward to your next update! V.
More please!
So far I really commend you on your depiction of interaction; I think it's neither too much, nor not enough. I've read stories where the author goes on and on about one character but forgets that there are a lot of others, too. I'm glad that's not the case here. And I think it's the first story I read where Snape gives up spying for the sake of Harry's wellbeing. That said, 'IMPERIO' - update story ^-^ (I really hope you mean to continue this..)
Even if I think Snape's developement is rather fast; but it is still balanced enough so it still works out in the end.
I like the fact that there is no extrem focus on Ron and Hermione - at least not yet..? -; I'm rather fond of a confident Neville. And Luna of course^^ I almost had to laugh when Hagrid was the one discovering what had been under their noses for some time; he is so often overlooked, but there he come pointing out the obvious. Or maybe not so obvious :-D
Love the last few chapters. :) Really like Snape and Harry's characterisations. And McGonagall's reaction to Dumbledore was very funny. Dumbledore's anger at Umbrage was brilliant too - very scary and powerful! Can't believe how much more you've written! I shall definitely enjoy catching up. Tabbycat.x
Ok, now that my rant is over... I really like what Harry said about having a parent to get on him about homework, and being respectful and getting to bed on time. He really needed that. For once, it's time for Harry to receive that comfort and that love from someone and it's time for Sev to give it. They really fit well with each other. And I like how Remus is just kinda there, he hovers a bit and it's like he's the medium between Sev and Harry. I like Remus a lot, even though he got all cold with Dumbledore. I'll let it pass loool. No clue how I can be a Slytherin and care this much about people being fair to the headmaster. I should be all "What ever works for me." and "I dun care as long as everything is alright for me." and stuff. Starting to feel like a Hufflepuff, Merlin! hehe Ok, you has to write more! Come back to us and deliver to us another chapter of awesomeness! |
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