I think this has a lot of promise ... can't wait to read the rest!
Beautifully written chapter; I love Snape's 'shop' persona and the character interaction was both believable and interesting. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
Brilliant opening chapter; I love how you've described Harry's devastation- he's in shock, isn't he? I experienced something similar for a whole two years after my beloved dog died; the numbness, the feeling that one has lost one's soul, become inhuman is, in fact, a very human reaction to a terrible event and I think you've portrayed it beautifully.
I also love the hint of dramatic irony; Ron was showing the old man Harry's picture, wasn't he?
awww that was soo sweet, I feel like crying happy tears. :-D Sevie helped harry a lot
oh this is a nice story, I don't know why I've never read it before. Great job and please continue to write, tis fantastic! :-D
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