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Title: Chapter 35 – The Attack 11 Aug 2012 2:19 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I am sure the knock is Severus, but really what they did didn't seem dangerous at all, just curious boys. If the adultk knew of the danger and didn't share that with the boys it's them that should be introuble... they were just being children. That's how kids learn, even if it somtimes dangerous, bet they don't go near the lake again until Victor has been adopted.

    Author's Response:

    Be patient with Alaster and Poppy. They are in shock and feel damn guilty. And remember Victor isn't adopted yet and Alastor and Poppy could even fear to loose their right to adopt him by the accident. And guess how they feel that Harry (the son of their friends) has almost died whilen he was with them. That can make even calm people panick. ;)

    As for the danger. Alastor said the creatures SHOULD have let go of them as soon as they realized they were human. So he had no clue there was any danger!

    Thanks for your review! I'm glad to see that still people are reading my story.

    Cheers,

    Sunny

Title: Chapter 34 – Shadow Dog 23 Jul 2012 1:58 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    The Mantura folk were interesting. I'm looking forward to the boys meeting other inhabitants of the area. Since they both swallowed the stones they will be able to understand them which should make for some good adventures.
Title: Chapter 34 – Shadow Dog 22 Jul 2012 5:56 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a cute chapter. I'm glad you updated! :)
Title: Chapter 34 – Shadow Dog 21 Jul 2012 10:00 pm
Reviewer: Kai (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Oh la la does Harry have a little crush on the mer-folk-thing? Hmmm...
Title: Chapter 33 - Sly 10 Jul 2012 11:38 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed that chapter, especially Harry and Severus' conversation on the way to Alastor's cottage. And the egg painting sounded fun!
Title: Chapter 33 - Sly 09 Jul 2012 2:28 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed the Easter egg painting. It will be interesting to find out how they celebrate the holiday. The woods and its inhabitants sound as impressive as the forest outside Hogwarts and should provide some exciting adventures. Victor and his new dog seems to be settling in well.
Title: Chapter 32 – Wild Creature 09 Jul 2012 2:13 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    The scene where the kids show Victor Harry's bed was fun. I wish I had a tree bed. No spiders though - I'm like Lysander. I always enjoy reading about the twins. The egg decorating will be something to look forward to. Holiday chapters are always good.
Title: Chapter 32 – Wild Creature 25 Jun 2012 12:06 am
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear, Harry always has something to worry about. Good chapter again - I love the twins, and it was nice to meet Victor again.
Title: Chapter 31 – Necessary Pain 01 Jun 2012 8:52 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    awwww harry i love him i loved seeing sev intereact with him excited to read more soon
Title: Chapter 31 – Necessary Pain 26 May 2012 12:07 am
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. Nice to have lots of family interaction, and it looks like there's plenty of fun coming up.

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