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Title: Chapter 16 – Healer Wright 24 Mar 2011 12:57 pm
Reviewer: Tessa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story more please

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 16 – Healer Wright 19 Mar 2011 2:44 am
Reviewer: HogwartsFan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I thought it was amazing. I love the way you incorporated the psychology and Harry's life problems together. I am constantly looking for your updates. I cannot wait to see what you have in store for the characters and I hope that Harry will get out soon and that his family will come back together. Keep writing, you are great at it!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 16 – Healer Wright 18 Mar 2011 8:17 pm
Reviewer: Beth (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hello,

    I have been following your story. I never leave reviews... sorry. I don't really know what to say. But anyway, I really enjoy reading your story and I'm not losing interest. I want you to know so you don't get discouraged.

    Thanks for writing,
    Beth

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 16 – Healer Wright 16 Mar 2011 6:20 am
Reviewer: BennettPotter (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm not losing interest. This is my favorite of your stories and one of my favorite Severus/Harry stories. I've just been very bad about showing my appreciation in reviews.

    Is Harry going to be going home and having to deal with those issues anytime soon? Also, I can't wait to see how Severus and Ivy address their problems. I'm hoping we'll see some Severus and Harry to deal with each other. It seems that things are a little less tense between Ivy and Harry, but things don't seem right between them (going back to earlier chapter when Sev seemed to want to protect Ivy and have Harry mad at him rather than Ivy). Please can we have some Severus soom? I really miss him and you do write him so very well!

    Author's Response:

    Harry will go home in chapter 21.Then there will be more interactions between him and his parents.

    Thank you very much for your review! 

     

Title: Chapter 16 – Healer Wright 15 Mar 2011 10:25 am
Reviewer: zalievana (Signed) [Report This]
    first of all i want to say that i think you are a good writer. really. the story has a great style, it is organised, you do not fall into cliches, the average length of chapters is just right too. on the other hand i feel that the topic of Harrys therapies is overused here. it is getting a bit dull. i think the story needs some kind of different action. doesnt have to be too much of it but at least a bit. maybe an exchange btw Sev and Ivy, or sth on the life of Harrys family while he is away. something to break the routine.

    Author's Response:

    I don't think there will come your wished break until Harry goes home in chapter 21.

    Thank you very much for your review! 

Title: Chapter 16 – Healer Wright 15 Mar 2011 6:46 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm still interested Grugster. I've just been ill for the past couple of months and had surgery, but I enjoyed this chappie.

    Author's Response: I hope you are feeling better by now.
    Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 16 – Healer Wright 14 Mar 2011 7:07 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I saw your note on reviews and I have to say that I read and then go away from this story and then come back. For me it is just too sad, and I'm not sure if this comment helps or not. I also read The Final Breeze 2 and that story is just more to my liking (it's not so depressing). I hope my honesty has helped.

    Author's Response:

    We are almost over the sad parts here. In Chapter 21 Harry will go home and things will become better. 

    Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 16 – Healer Wright 14 Mar 2011 3:20 pm
Reviewer: Frostbluete (Signed) [Report This]
    No, not losing interest at all over here *waves* This story is great and I always enjoy your updates, even if I'm rather silent about it ;)

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 16 – Healer Wright 14 Mar 2011 3:13 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Just FYI-- you have an amazing gift for making me cry.

    Wonderful job on the chapter--as usual. Thanks for updating.

    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 16 – Healer Wright 14 Mar 2011 2:59 am
Reviewer: Hampig (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I agree with hawkswench, I'm still interested but just waiting for more to happen. : ) I'm always sad when I get to the end of a chapter and have to wait for the next.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!

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