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Reviews For Pulse
Title: Chapter 3 21 Aug 2010 8:28 pm
Reviewer: Perri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm excited to see where this goes. Keep up the good work.

    Author's Response: This is late, but thankyou for the review. :)
Title: Chapter 3 20 Aug 2010 11:32 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter; I loved the dialogue between Harry and Severus. Dumbledore's ideas about pulsing are rather in chatacter; the old Headmaster's a bit of a rogue lol!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Title: Chapter 3 20 Aug 2010 10:41 pm
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter. I like the subtle manipulation with Dumbledore and Severus along with Severus and Harry. Your inclusion of Shacklebolt was nice also because it shows a bit of distrust between the two. Good job.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 3 20 Aug 2010 9:19 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Freaking fantastic. I love the explanation of Pulse, how Snape thought that Dumbledore wanted to learn it but that his body wouldn't handle it. Nice how they maneuvered it to Harry. :) I like your Snape and how he has changed.

    I am really interested of how Tobias woke up. I suppose it was natural and the Wizards just happened to be there at the same time?

    I wonder if Tobias remembered Severus and still loves him... it will be very interesting to see their meeting, which I suppose will happen much later.

    I can't wait to see the start of Harry's training. It seems as if he need to start running and get in better shape to have his heart prepared to start pulsing. Awesome story. I absolutely love this premise and I was so happy to see an update! Thanks for the post!

    Author's Response:

    Thankyou!  Hmmm...I don't think I can answer your ponderings without giving something away, but Tobias' situation should be clarified pretty soon.

Title: Chapter 2 17 Aug 2010 6:07 am
Reviewer: Anon #37c (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fascinating! I hope you will continue!

    Author's Response: Thankyou!
Title: Chapter 2 14 Aug 2010 9:07 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    AWESOME. I freaking love it. I hope that more people will find it and read it too. :) You might want to add more to your summary if you have time, maybe something like "Harry Potter experiences it firsthand as an Apprentice to one of its founders... someone Harry thinks he doesn't want to learn anything from, let alone something he could become addicted to..." The apprentice thing is a big draw to this crowd, and adding that bit on to the summary brings Harry and Snape's interaction to the forefront in this new and exciting situation.

    Hope to get a new chapter soon! :D

    Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion. I've edited the sum and am still thinking about whether I want to change it further.
Title: Chapter 2 14 Aug 2010 6:33 am
Reviewer: Penny (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Your Snape is for different but I kinda like it. :) Keep it up!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 2 14 Aug 2010 1:52 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    I believe this will be an interesting story and I am glad I clicked on it. The summary had me on the eh side; but it does seem to be a very original and unique story. Can't wait for more. :D

    Author's Response: Thankyou.:)
Title: Chapter 2 14 Aug 2010 1:33 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting twist at the end; I wonder what Lucius is plotting... Great chapter, beautifully written and engaging with realistic character interaction

    Author's Response: Lucius is a slippery one. :) Thanks!
Title: Chapter 1 13 Aug 2010 6:17 pm
Reviewer: lilette (Signed) [Report This]
    Really intriguing! I hope you update soon!

    Author's Response: Thankyou.  I plan to try at least weekly.

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