Yep, Severus walked right into that one! I love Prisoners, so am here to binge on some of your other stories!
I love that the story is from Snape's point of view. That's new.
🤣 Snape did walk right into that one. And he calls himself a Slytherin.
I love that the story is from Snape's point of view. That's new.
🤣 Snape did walk right into that one. And he calls himself a Slytherin.
Harry hanging onto Professor Snape's leg and looking at him in wonder is such an adorable thing to visualize. Little Hermione and little Harry interacting and seeing them as children is a wonder because it's like this is why they are the way they are sort of realization.
Author's Response: Thanks for your thoughts Applefritter! I just loved that scene myself so it really lifts my heart to know you like it too! :) cheers, Whitetail
I am rereading this upon finding it again, after somebody else inquired after it. This tale just as delightful this second time around!
Author's Response: Thanks Dream! Awesome to hear from you. It's nice to know people are re-reading some of my work, long after it was written. :)
I laughed outloud multiple times! I read parts to my kids and laughed some more. Looking forward to this series.
Author's Response: Hey hisnhers! Great to hear you got a few good laughs out of the first chapter! Even more awesome to hear you're sharing it with your kids. It's really cool to hear that a story I've done is being shared within families. Thanks a lot for the review, and I hope you enjoy!
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| 15 Feb 2011 2:01 am
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| Reviewer: projectjay@hotmail.com (Anonymous)
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Poor Severus, Hermione, and Harry. But maybe it will open his eyes to how Harry was raised and let our boy grown up right.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Oh yeah, maybe don't put your email adress here, otherwise anyone can see it! : )
| Title: A Disaster in the Making
| 01 Dec 2010 3:45 am
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| Reviewer: elizzza (Signed)
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I am sure it is an oversight, but I hope future chapters do not call Granger "Mrs" - you do not really expect a schoolgirl (or a 4-year old) to be married. :)
Author's Response: Oops! Did I really put Mrs? Thank you sooo much for pointing that out. I tend to do that! :(
| Title: A Disaster in the Making
| 16 Oct 2010 6:55 am
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| Reviewer: SlytheringPotter (Anonymous)
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I love your writing style and the idea of the story is very original. Or at least, I haven't heard of it being done before. I also like how you kept everyone in character - that's a huge one. Can't wait to see what happens!
Yes, that's Hermoine allright xD
And I really liked how you portrayed Harry here, it seems real
Jumping onto the next one now xD
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