| Title: The Fate of Severus Snape
| 28 Apr 2024 11:08 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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It’s so hard to write 4-year-olds, but you’ve done it so well! I like hearing Snape’s inner dialogue.
| Title: The Fate of Severus Snape
| 09 Aug 2019 1:44 am
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| Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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... ought to review this wonderful story, so... I adore it, and read, and re-read it. Thank You very much for writing such a good tonic against gloom and life.
This chapter two just has me chuckling out loud: Snape is a delight in his gruff softness, and the children are sweeties. His inner musings do me in, always.
Have you ever read Celeste's
'Three Gryffindors and a Baby'on ffnet?
Ron is a very, very evil reader of nighttime-stories and 'his' puppy has a very short life, much to Neville's horror. The fic is also a gem.-
but a WIP.
Again , thank you so much, and for completing your stories.
' Tis a consummation Devoutly to be wished.'
Best regards and Ta.
I love how you don't use punctuation when Hermione speaks, it really portrays her well!
Author's Response: Oh my I had forgotten about that! Why thank you! Your review has made my day much better! However infrequent I check these days, reviews still give me a boost when I need it! . Cheers, Whitetail
--sniff--
I laughed a lot.... loudly!
So sweet. I'm loving this!
--his
Author's Response: Great to hear! I laughed pretty hard writing it, so it's a delight to hear it tickles your funnybone too.:) Cheers, Whitetail.
| Title: The Fate of Severus Snape
| 15 Feb 2011 2:18 am
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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Severus is getting a eye opening. That is good.
| Title: The Fate of Severus Snape
| 21 Aug 2010 1:04 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great start to the story I love hermione so in character
| Title: The Fate of Severus Snape
| 20 Aug 2010 7:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Your Hermione is perfect! I totaly feel for Severus having her around. *lol* Can't wait for the next chapter.
| Title: The Fate of Severus Snape
| 18 Aug 2010 10:07 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Wow, you have hermione down pat, she never stops! And Harry, how sweet, I am glad Sev is seeing harry for the first time, he will protect him from the dursleys. And Ron was too cute, bringing their "friends" down, he should be their babysitter. Of course since you OBLIVIATED us, I didn't remember anything I read, but great chapter,
| Title: The Fate of Severus Snape
| 18 Aug 2010 4:03 am
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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‘Blanky!’ Shouted Granger.
This is a mistake that drives me crazy.
It's: ‘Blanky!’ shouted Granger.
Author's Response: Thanks, I actually never noticed that! I'll do my best to fix those errors in the future. :)
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