Great chapter xx
I don't think the should be reaged(sp?) as they should grow up like that or at least Harry should
A part of me hopes that the potions won't work. It seems to me that both children were abused in a way, though Hermione's is much more subtle...I get the feeling that perhaps her parent's expectations are extremely high, even to the point of being ridiculous, and she has become terrified at gaining their disappointment. It's good that they wish her to do well, but if they push to hard, particularly when she is this young, it will foster in her the tendency to become far too focused on somethings, like studying, while ignoring the rest, such as socialization. All children need to play, just as they need to learn.
| Title: Revelations of the Granger Sort
| 04 Sep 2010 4:52 am
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| Reviewer: Imai (Signed)
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Aww!
Snapey-Poo was being all...
Well, sweet doesn't fit him...
But I hope you update soon!
Awwwwwww! This story is so adorable! Poor little Harry! I hope Severus does ... well, keep Harry. I don't want him to have to go back to the Dursley's. Please update soon!
Hermione is so precious in this chapter. you really have the speech patterns down for a couple of four year olds.
| Title: Revelations of the Granger Sort
| 04 Sep 2010 2:19 am
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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Full of Americanisms; 'hung out' for one; Minerva talks like a teenager.
| Title: The Perfect Gift
| 02 Sep 2010 11:03 pm
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| Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous)
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Aah.Loved the floo travel section. Harry is so sweet its no wonder Snape has been won over, but then Snape is surprisingly nice and kind too so of course its mutual.Wonder if it will last when Harry's grown up again.
| Title: The Perfect Gift
| 02 Sep 2010 1:43 am
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| Reviewer: Imai (Anonymous)
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Great chapter! Severus never stood a chance, did he?
Looking forward to the next update!
| Title: The Perfect Gift
| 30 Aug 2010 9:05 am
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| Reviewer: karee (Signed)
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Lovely chapter, can't wait to read the next one
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