| Title: The Perfect Gift
| 30 Aug 2010 8:30 am
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| Reviewer: karee (Signed)
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Lovely chapter, can't wait to read the next one
| Title: The Perfect Gift
| 30 Aug 2010 8:02 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Harry must stay with Severus, I hate the Dursleys. Hermione cracks me up, your way of writing about her is totally on target. Great chapter.
This was a really sweet, enjoyable chapter. :)
I hope that Severus will look closer into Harry's living situation now that he knows that the child shows all the classic signs of being abused. Harry needs someone to take care of him, even once he's re-aged; a father figure if you will.
| Title: The Perfect Gift
| 30 Aug 2010 4:32 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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I liked the gift Harry picked up for Hermione and how he complained and confided in Severus and how he reacted in turn. Will look forward to the next chappie!
Awww! I really love the non-antagonistic interaction between Sev and the kids, especially Harry. You've nicely balanced that with Sev's relationship with Minerva-- slaps to the back of the head! Terrific! Will look forward to seeing your story unfold in the chapters to come! Lovely!
| Title: That's it. I'm Banning Spaghetti!
| 24 Aug 2010 1:58 am
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| Reviewer: hypercell (Signed)
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I hope you update soon!! Hermione keeps cracking me up!!!
He did walk right into that. :) I think you wrote Hermione at four years old very well!
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