| Title: A Disaster in the Making
| 15 Aug 2010 1:10 am
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| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed)
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Ah, that's a great beginning! I love Severus' dry comments, and Hermione's babbling. And of course Harry is just too sweet and cute. Looking forward to more.
| Title: A Disaster in the Making
| 15 Aug 2010 12:41 am
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| Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
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Sneaky Dumbledore! And poor Severus! Indeed, no way he is getting out of this one...
A great opening chapter, I loved Hermione's non-stop talking, and I think Snape's POV works really well.
Please update soon!
| Title: A Disaster in the Making
| 14 Aug 2010 11:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Ray22 (Anonymous)
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Cool story and absoulutly hilarius
Please continue.
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