It’s with endings like these that I really wish there was more ahead! Thanks for your heart warming short.
I'm not sure what to say, given that you haven't told us what kind of universe this is taking place in. If it were canon I would comment on how quickly Severus and Harry seemed to drop years of hatred, and how Dumbledore, one of the most powerful occlumence had somehow gotten a lock put on his memories. Unless he put it there himself for some reason? Hmm
Anyway, I don't know exactly what to make of it from an accuracy angle, but as for the concept you've presented, it's really interesting. :)
| Title: Hidden Memory
| 17 Dec 2013 12:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Zang (Signed)
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I'm glad Harry asked to live with Snape :)
i would like snape to find out about the abuse :Q they be in trouuubllle
its great. but i think some fleshing out would make it even better!
Author's Response: Thank you. I am planning to go back and "flesh out" a lot of my drabbles in the future when I feel inspired and have the time. I'm glad you liked it. :).
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