| Title: Chapter 4
| 19 Aug 2014 3:38 am
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| Reviewer: Jtz (Signed)
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Powerful writing. What is your area of study?
Do you know how to write anything other than awesome stuff? Keep it up! ^_^
Argh Umbridge needs to die a slow and painful death...!
This is really, really good.
Beautiful. Horrible, but lovely. :0/
| Title: Chapter 4
| 21 Dec 2010 5:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Myatery gets deeper thank you for a great story
Nice chapter. Scary, and disturbing, yet intriguing. Good job with the language and descriptions. I am enjoying Snape's thoughts. Thanks for the update!
Umbitch needs to die.
Poor Harry
When is Snape going to figure out the memory?
Love this story! Love the pacing and the writing. I can't wait to see what happens when Snape discovers the true nature of the memory. Umbridge is truly evil and right on. This is my favorite line: "...and watches as Snape’s hands smooth his robes, tuck his wand away so quickly Harry’s not sure where it’s gone." Beautiful. Please update soon!
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