Wow, very intense and dramatic. Poor Harry, he's so tortured right now... And damn that Lockheart!
These last few chapter have featured a whirlwind of powerful emotions but I can still take in all of it attach myself to Harry or Snape at each moment and understand their frustration and confusion. I can't wait for an update!
Title: Chapter 5
| 21 Jan 2011 6:49 am
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Reviewer: Doxie (Anonymous)
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Thanks for writing. I look forward to seeing what is going to happen.
Title: Chapter 5
| 20 Jan 2011 11:28 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Bit rushed but very dramatic thank you
I love this. I like how you've made Harry's pov so disconcerting and frightened. Can't wait for the next update :)
This story is wow. It's really amazing. I like the format it's in. I can't wait for more.
This is extremely intense. I love how you've kept Snape in character and hope that you continue to do so. I'm nervous! Things are really building up, aren't they? Wonderful chapter.
Title: Chapter 5
| 18 Jan 2011 4:15 pm
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Reviewer: a37 (Anonymous)
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Oh, gosh. Poor baby! Oh, I just want to hug him!!!!!! Please write more soon!
Title: Chapter 5
| 18 Jan 2011 7:35 am
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Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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ouch! poor Harry More please soon ? !!!!!!!!!!!Thank you
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