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Title: Complications and Slides 24 Sep 2011 3:25 am
Reviewer: topeswin (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I'm really enjoying this story.
Title: Complications and Slides 20 Feb 2005 2:22 am
Reviewer: Gray Darken (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awwww.... how cute! Will you update soon?? I would very much love if you did, because this is simply wonderful. ^o^ Thank you for posting the story!
Title: Complications and Slides 18 Feb 2005 1:38 am
Reviewer: Mikee (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a delightful story. I really like how you've characterized everyone. I especially like how you are treating Severus and Harry. . I am impressed that you have given each child his own set of challenges (taking into account the fact that their backgrounds are not too dissimilar in that both were abusive). It would be all too easy to have each boy act the same. . I don't like that Severus is a bully, but I understand his actions, and they make sence (as do Harry's passive actions). I like that you balance his aggressive action by having him be insecure about his bullying action, and then adding the comforting action of Sev patting Harry on the head shows that Sev is struggling with what he was taught at the hands of his father against what he leaned from Albus. I am quite looking forward to seeing the benefits to Severus of his time as a toddler once summer is over. Will this affect how he perceives Harry (and other students) when he is re-aged.? . I really like how Harry needs constant reinforcement that he has value and worth. Well done, and so realistic. Since he is so much younger than Severus (pre de-aging potion), he still carries, quite obviously, his insecurities. He hasn't really leaned to mask them - at least not well. I am looking forward to seeing how being de-aged will benifit Harry at the end of summer. . Do you ever e-mail update notifications.? If so, may I ask to be included.? I'd hate to miss any of this story. . You can e-mail me at: Scooter7232@c... . Thank you for a wonderful story. .

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Title: Complications and Slides 11 Feb 2005 8:38 pm
Reviewer: GoddessMoonLady (Signed) [Report This]
    lol! That was cute! Poor boys. *shakes head* First one, then the other. *sigh* *snicker* I can't wait to see Minerva at the park. lol! That ought to be interesting. *grin* great chaps! NEXT!

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