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Title: Chapter 1: A Dark Lord Returns 15 Apr 2016 2:36 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a surprising first chapter. I like the way you turned canon on its head and changed everything. Poor Harry. Nothing was the way he thought it was. Looking forward to more.
Title: Chapter 1: A Dark Lord Returns 03 Mar 2012 12:02 pm
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed) [Report This]
    Absolutely wicked! Especially loved
    the way that Harry learns the real
    truth about his friends but also the
    way that nefarious plans of Al & Gill
    are revealed!

    That finally Harry gets to show that
    he's much more than just a brave
    Gryffindor...that he has elements of all houses within him. But just what will Harry do about his betrayers...because in the past they won't have betrayed him yet?
Title: Chapter 1: A Dark Lord Returns 12 Dec 2011 2:07 pm
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow....truly, utterely awesome story beginning...which certainly had me on the edge of my seat. I barely had time to write this review because I'm so eager to press the "next" button to find out what will happen next!

    It so easy to see Dumbledore being such a manipulative, twisted git and him an Grindelwald being the root cause of all of the wizarding worlds problems, even for
    Tom Riddle becoming Voldemort. And for what did they do this, greed
    and power...for there both certainly as mad as hatters! But how did they manage to twist all of Harry's supposed friends into playing along with them? Just how long had they truly been Harry's friends, or were those meetings so contrived by Dumbledore's manipulations as well.
Title: Chapter 1: A Dark Lord Returns 13 Jun 2011 3:53 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow, this is very interesting!
Title: Chapter 1: A Dark Lord Returns 14 Dec 2010 10:13 pm
Reviewer: JLAJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting plotline so far.

    Some problems, though, prevent one from enjoying the story to the fullest extent. Grindelwald's name was Gellert, not Gillert. Also, there are some issues with your sentences. For example, "I am sorry Harry for everything." Should be I am sorry, Harry, for everything. There are a lot of sentences like this that are missing commas.

    I think this would be an awesome story with those little things fixed, great job! I hope to see more from you in the future.

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