Great battle! Though Dumbledore and Grindelwald are still on the loose. Too bad the story hasn't been updated for so long. It's a different direction from most time travel fics.
yes they defeated morfin!!!! now all they need to do is defeat dumbledork and his lover. cant wait for the next chapter. :)
I hope you write more of this wonderful story in the future. I'd love to see what happens next!
Its amazing that know matter what changes Severus has made in the past, somethings just seem to have to happen. Though I do wonder just how many witches, wizards and non-magicals have been born or saved that never had a change in the previous version of time.
Dumbledore really is insidious in how he moves, plots and manipulates all of those innocent, naive children at Hogwarts, like he tried with Damien, Daniel and later with Tommy. How many others has he manipulated, forced into playing along with his twisted views. Honestly, Hogwarts would be much better of without the likes of Albus too-many-names Dumbledore, how on earth he can have been sorted into Gryffindor as a student, I seriously doubt! Hmm, if Salazar Slytherin has/had a portrait of himself at Hogwarts, but what about the other 3 founders...and if Salazar, supposedly left Hogwarts, because of his disagreement with the other 3 then why would his portrait have remained at Hogwarts, in the Slytherin common room, hmm?
I can hardly wait to find out just what both Severus, and Salazar will have to say to there errant little heir Tommy, but call me Tom? Absolutely loved the battle with the intruders into Willow Castle, how the snakes battled, and the untimely arrival of Severus, John (and Salazar) upon the basilisk from Hogwarts....totally wicked!!
Its amazing that know matter what changes Severus has made in the past, somethings just seem to have to happen. Though I do wonder just how many witches, wizards and non-magicals have been born or saved that never had a change in the previous version of time.
Dumbledore really is insidious in how he moves, plots and manipulates all of those innocent, naive children at Hogwarts, like he tried with Damien, Daniel and later with Tommy. How many others has he manipulated, forced into playing along with his twisted views. Honestly, Hogwarts would be much better of without the likes of Albus too-many-names Dumbledore, how on earth he can have been sorted into Gryffindor as a student, I seriously doubt! Hmm, if Salazar Slytherin has/had a portrait of himself at Hogwarts, but what about the other 3 founders...and if Salazar, supposedly left Hogwarts, because of his disagreement with the other 3 then why would his portrait have remained at Hogwarts, in the Slytherin common room, hmm?
I can hardly wait to find out just what both Severus, and Salazar will have to say to there errant little heir Tommy, but call me Tom? Absolutely loved the battle with the intruders into Willow Castle, how the snakes battled, and the untimely arrival of Severus, John (and Salazar) upon the basilisk from Hogwarts....totally wicked!!
| Title: Chapter 12: Battle of the Snakes
| 20 Oct 2011 10:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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I really enjoyed re-reading this story. It's a totally engaging AU that makes sense within it's premise, and I love how Severus' and Harry's actions are changing things--hopefully all for the better!
If I were to detail what I thought about this chapter, this review would end up as long as the chapter itself! So I'll just say that this was a great read and I look forward to the day when the next chapter is posted!
Well done!
Good couple of chapters. Yay Morfin is finally dead. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
| Title: Chapter 12: Battle of the Snakes
| 12 Jan 2011 6:25 pm
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| Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed)
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Awesome! What a wonderful chapter. I love how Harry's old life is blending just a bit with his new. Like seeing the image of a red-haired friend in previous chapters or seeing Death in this one.
You sure managed to squeeze a lot into the chapter and I really appreciate it. Thanks again and again for sharing your tale with us.
Intense. What was it that Harry saw at the end? And why exactly hasn't he spoken to Severus about what he see? Update soon
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