Wow....truly, utterely awesome story beginning...which certainly had me on the edge of my seat. I barely had time to write this review because I'm so eager to press the "next" button to find out what will happen next!
It so easy to see Dumbledore being such a manipulative, twisted git and him an Grindelwald being the root cause of all of the wizarding worlds problems, even for
Tom Riddle becoming Voldemort. And for what did they do this, greed
and power...for there both certainly as mad as hatters! But how did they manage to twist all of Harry's supposed friends into playing along with them? Just how long had they truly been Harry's friends, or were those meetings so contrived by Dumbledore's manipulations as well.
| Title: Chapter 12: Battle of the Snakes
| 20 Oct 2011 10:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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I really enjoyed re-reading this story. It's a totally engaging AU that makes sense within it's premise, and I love how Severus' and Harry's actions are changing things--hopefully all for the better!
If I were to detail what I thought about this chapter, this review would end up as long as the chapter itself! So I'll just say that this was a great read and I look forward to the day when the next chapter is posted!
Well done!
interesting, i was not expecting for him to be deaged. good job!
wow, this is very interesting!
Good couple of chapters. Yay Morfin is finally dead. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
| Title: Chapter 12: Battle of the Snakes
| 12 Jan 2011 6:25 pm
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| Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed)
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Awesome! What a wonderful chapter. I love how Harry's old life is blending just a bit with his new. Like seeing the image of a red-haired friend in previous chapters or seeing Death in this one.
You sure managed to squeeze a lot into the chapter and I really appreciate it. Thanks again and again for sharing your tale with us.
Intense. What was it that Harry saw at the end? And why exactly hasn't he spoken to Severus about what he see? Update soon
| Title: Chapter 11: Not A Real Slytherin
| 09 Jan 2011 1:55 am
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| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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Yikes! What a cliffhanger! This is just an awesome, awesome story! I can hardly wait to see what happens next!
Wow, that's an ominous ending. Great chapter, though :)
Oh noes! Evil cliff hanger....please oh please update really really soon I beg of you! :)
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