No, no, no. Update soon please. Don't leave me hanging here.
OOOOOOOOH! Nasty! Nasty! Uncle M. Alright--all of you elvin wariors--attack!
Great chapter! Love every single update.
V.
No, no, you can't leave it there - you have to update soon - pleaseeeeee!!
Absolutely awesome! I literally could not stop reading, going from chapter to chapter until I got to the "To be continued..."
I love this twist on time travel, and I especially like how you've managed to keep it feeling like the Harry Potterverse, bu also incorporated things from other ficverses and our real life history.
I look forward to the next chapter (and all of the ones to follow it!). Well done!
This story is pretty good. I like how Harry is getting flashes of his old life. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
Oh, very nice story. Interesting idea to bring in the elves.
I think that Harry should tell Severus the things that he is remembering because it may hurt him later but loving your story.
| Title: Chapter 1: A Dark Lord Returns
| 14 Dec 2010 10:13 pm
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| Reviewer: JLAJ (Anonymous)
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Very interesting plotline so far.
Some problems, though, prevent one from enjoying the story to the fullest extent. Grindelwald's name was Gellert, not Gillert. Also, there are some issues with your sentences. For example, "I am sorry Harry for everything." Should be I am sorry, Harry, for everything. There are a lot of sentences like this that are missing commas.
I think this would be an awesome story with those little things fixed, great job! I hope to see more from you in the future.
Great chapter. excellent resolutions but sad happenings, too.
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