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Reviews For Common Interests
I loved your description of Charlie. Too bad I can't draw well, because I'd love to sketch the mental image that came to my mind when I read the last section. :) Poor Severus is going to have grey streaks in his hair at this rate! I had to laugh at his reaction to finding Harry sleeping with the robe. But Harry finding comfort in it was so sweet. I reminded me of when I got deployed for 6 months with my reserve unit and I asked my husband to send me one of his shirts so I could wrap it around my pillow and breathe his scent when I went to bed literally half a world away from him. I really have been enjoying this tale so much, Snapegirl. When I consider the challenges that you have faced in the last year or so, I can only be grateful that you have taken of your valuable time to write the marvelous stories to share with us that brighten our days. I had a rather rotten day today, and reading this chapter really helped cheer me up and lifted my spirits. I thank you most sincerely for the gift of your talent. I look forward to your next offering, whether it be a new chapter for this story, one of your others, or a new tale altogether. Well done!
I love how Harry sleeps with Severus' robe, I wonder if Sev will realize that maybe Harry is doing that because he feels such a devasting loss in losing the trust of a man he loves and admires and respects. I can well imagine that Sev will react quite spectacularlly (sp). Charlie's lecture was just right and right on, you really gave some depth and thought to this dragon problem and really it applies to all wild creatures whether they are fantasy or real. Well done! Looking forward as ever to the next chapter! Remember, writing fanfiction is all you are supposed to do!! LOL :P
This was one of my favorite chapters! I cannot wait to read the next one!
Hope the kids make it through that forest!
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