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Title: Further Consequences 25 Feb 2012 2:51 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    This was an excellent chapter. I really like the consequences that you devised for the kids that were commensurate with the severity of their transgressions.

    I loved your description of Charlie. Too bad I can't draw well, because I'd love to sketch the mental image that came to my mind when I read the last section. :)

    Poor Severus is going to have grey streaks in his hair at this rate! I had to laugh at his reaction to finding Harry sleeping with the robe. But Harry finding comfort in it was so sweet. I reminded me of when I got deployed for 6 months with my reserve unit and I asked my husband to send me one of his shirts so I could wrap it around my pillow and breathe his scent when I went to bed literally half a world away from him.

    I really have been enjoying this tale so much, Snapegirl. When I consider the challenges that you have faced in the last year or so, I can only be grateful that you have taken of your valuable time to write the marvelous stories to share with us that brighten our days. I had a rather rotten day today, and reading this chapter really helped cheer me up and lifted my spirits. I thank you most sincerely for the gift of your talent. I look forward to your next offering, whether it be a new chapter for this story, one of your others, or a new tale altogether.

    Well done!
Title: Further Consequences 24 Feb 2012 12:02 am
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Despite all the punishments none of the children seemed to regret the time spent with Viv, so it was a very good idea to have Charlie talk with them. It was also nice to see something of all the other Weasley boys. Does Severus realise how much Harry needs his approval, and not just a safe place to live? Excellent long chapter - had to wait till I had plenty of time to enjoy it. I look forward to finding out what awaits them in the Forest.
Title: Further Consequences 22 Feb 2012 1:57 am
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    This was so great!!! I loved how you brought all the loose ends together, the detentions, both individually and together were perfect. I really couldn't imagine what was going to happen and you exceeded my expectations.

    I love how Harry sleeps with Severus' robe, I wonder if Sev will realize that maybe Harry is doing that because he feels such a devasting loss in losing the trust of a man he loves and admires and respects. I can well imagine that Sev will react quite spectacularlly (sp).

    Charlie's lecture was just right and right on, you really gave some depth and thought to this dragon problem and really it applies to all wild creatures whether they are fantasy or real.

    Well done! Looking forward as ever to the next chapter! Remember, writing fanfiction is all you are supposed to do!! LOL :P
Title: Further Consequences 21 Feb 2012 7:21 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the scenes with Harry and Sev's robe. It was sweet and heartbreaking. I hope Severus realizes soon what Harry's reasoning is for sleeping with his robe. Love the long chapter. I have a feeling things are gonna heat up and Severus might find out the reasoning of Harry's quietness among other things. I am curious as to who ransacked the library and who the fifth marauder is as I can't find as clues that indicate the identity of both. I think quirrell might be one of them but I can't be sure. Looking forward to more.
Title: Further Consequences 21 Feb 2012 7:34 am
Reviewer: twilight1987 (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry using Sev's robe as a safety blanket was so sweet... Though I hope Sev realizes soon why he is using it.

    This was one of my favorite chapters! I cannot wait to read the next one!
Title: Further Consequences 21 Feb 2012 7:14 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay, thanks for the update and lovely chapter as usual.

    Hope the kids make it through that forest!
Title: Further Consequences 21 Feb 2012 5:38 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Sooo sweet, angsty, and cute.

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