| Title: The Justice of Ravens
| 18 Jun 2012 2:31 am
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| Reviewer: Aeryun (Signed)
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Very interesting story. I spent the past few days devouring it on my phone. Which is why you are only now getting a review. My phone doesn't like to leave reviews for some weird reason. I can't wait for more! I am very sorry to hear about your mother's health. I do hope she is doing better by now! *hugs*
I was waiting to see if it would be like the bonfires of old, but alas, you made it quick. (Either that or obliged the public by not being too graphic!)
So can you like have a pissed off Lily torture the wench in the afterlife please? I mean, she messed with Lily's memories! She needs more punishment!
The dragonet was cute! So was her mom (shush, don't tell!)and Severus' bonding over children.
So what will happen now?
PS- Whiny Gryffindor brats would be awesome. Especially if someone was to slip and tell the Gryffs who probably believe Merlin was a Gryff that he was one of their "arch-rivals."
Better yet! Can the heads have fun and switch houses for a week or two?
So sweet to bring back Viv, added a good touch and softened the trial.
Absolutely wonderful. The trial, the verdict, the punishment and OOOHHH the DRAGONS! I LOVE VIV and Lady Isolde! I hope we see them again.
V.
I especially liked the description of Ravencrest Castle and the Ravenmistress. The trial was good, too, though the appearance of the dragons was a surprise. It was a fitting end for Marlene. Thanks for a great chapter.
Super great chapter! Love Viv
Ohh, that chapter was awesome! I can't believe what Marlene did to Lily though. Ugh she's horrible! Thank goodness we saw the end of her. And you brought Viv and her mum back too! Viv made me smile- she's adorable:) I really liked Isolde too.
I love this story!
Great Update, love this story.
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