Great chapter! Hmm I can't help thinking that Dante would be best suited to Ravenclaw... He seems quite bright and his knowledge of American wizardy would probably help him.
| Title: Smiles and Secrets
| 03 Apr 2013 7:08 am
|
| Reviewer: Me (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
You're breathing fresh life into the story with this Dante char. I'd been bored for a bit, but kept on because I love Skull so much. I assume Dante will be bringing the diary, then? Or is it something entirely different? You do this very well. :)
Dante would hate it but I think he is a Slytherin. Besides, with his current problems it would give him a chance to get to know Severus better. Sev and Skull would be able to keep a close eye on him, too. After Sev and Lockhart's first meeting, I am curious about whether there will be the imfamous dueling scene in a future chapter.
Great description of Snape going into the book store. Talk about a young man caught between a rock and a hard place. A stranger in a strange land and no one he is comfortable tiwth to talk to.
|