| Title: A Power He Knows Not
| 21 Sep 2014 3:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Chapter 34 (Anonymous)
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Good chapter! Epic battle, well written.
| Title: Revenant
| 21 Sep 2014 2:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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The book can talk to Harry, point out the best spells, and nobody needs to guess.
| Title: Evil Stalking
| 21 Sep 2014 7:24 am
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| Reviewer: chapter 31 (Anonymous)
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Good job tying up so many loose ends.
| Title: Crime and Punishment
| 21 Sep 2014 6:50 am
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| Reviewer: chapter 30 (Anonymous)
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Somebody needs to change the locks in the library, because Irma's key got stolen. Also, Marlene gave the revenant permission to feed however he wishes, so there should be trouble from that amount of freedom. Last but not lease, poor little Prissy the house elf is all alone. I hope someone will give her a good home.
| Title: Unexpected Discovery
| 18 Sep 2014 11:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Yeah, well, if you'd write one story at a time you could keep track of the small things like changing from Snape saving Harry 4 times to only 2, or Harry calling him Sev throughout the first half of this series, then sir or Professor, then being "allowed" to call him Severus, then suddenly switching to Uncle Severus. The story is great, but it would be better with an editor or with you only writing one story at a time
I've read this story before, and if I've already said this then I apologize, but what Dante said about American's don't label people "like that" always makes me laugh. Except this time. I'm not in the greatest of moods because I'm hurt possibly needing surgery. Anyway, this time I got mad. Not at you but because Americans DO label people terribly and I hate that about "my" country. I'd love to find a place that gets to know you, the real you; not what your papers say about you, before judging you. Sorry about my venting. I'm not meaning it to be a flame. My email is roses of winter @ yahoo if I've aggravated you or something. I don't check email often so if it takes awhile for me to respond that's why.
| Title: Trouble at the Platform
| 20 Jan 2014 6:39 am
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| Reviewer: Beth (Anonymous)
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awesome! hey, when's there gonna be an update?
| Title: Trouble at the Platform
| 02 Oct 2013 12:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Syrine (Anonymous)
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You need to have Snape spank Harry with the paddle, and Dante, too.
Let's say they just get to school and bump into the willow just like the book, and have snape flip out just like the book. And into the dungeons they go for a spanking! Well, that's what I really really want you to make happen!
Please do not abandon this story because it's the best Harry/Snape fanfic that I've read in my whole life (trust me, I've read a LOT)... and you need to make it happen! The spanking! The story! Everything! Snapegirl, please update fast fast fast! I'm gonna die of anticipation if you don't! And, you're such an awesome writer!!! Your words and vocabulary match so well together. :) I really need to read the rest of this story. And, don't tell anyone... you're better than JKR. I think I've enjoyed your story far better than the original books. The revenant thing? Boy that was great! Let your imagination fly... and put some more spanking scenes... please!!!! I'll be waiting for your awesome story... please don't make me wait more than a week!
| Title: Stalker
| 01 Oct 2013 6:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Syrine (Anonymous)
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| Title: A Breach of Trust
| 01 Oct 2013 5:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Syrine (Anonymous)
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Finally a spanking scene! I've been waiting forever for this? How about you describe it a bit more vividly?
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