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Title: Crime and Punishment 29 May 2012 11:37 pm
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed) [Report This]
    A really good ending to Harry's kidnapping, and even better to see it reported where Sirius can read about it. Now when will the doggie escape?

    Skull is such and interesting and funny addition to the story. That song and dance was hilarious.
Title: Crime and Punishment 29 May 2012 11:04 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I am glad you went with both ideas for punishing Marlene. She deserves both. The scene with her in Azkaban was good. I'm sure it came as a shock to her that Sirius denounced her. I'm looking forward to seeing what the Ravenmistress has in store for her in the next chapter. I'm glad to hear that you mother is home again. Hopefully, she will fully recover.
Title: Crime and Punishment 29 May 2012 3:14 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, wonderful story Snapegirl! I love the descriptions of the two parties and Harry allowing himself to be a kid for once with not going to bed. (I'm happily thinking of how the Gryffindors would react to having a bed time.)

    Congratuations, you made me actually like Sirius this time around!

    Good luck with your mom and please take care of yourself, kay?

    Author's Response:

    I'll try! I have just updated again so now you can see the Society in action . . . and the return of a very familiar creature with wings!

    I think the Gryffindors would become whiny brats, LOL! Until Sev straightened them out, that is.

Title: Crime and Punishment 29 May 2012 12:17 pm
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    This is great. I do hope Sirius will get his freedom soon and Harry gets to know a proper godparent. Oh Marlene, I almost feel sorry for the old witch. I wonder what fare awaits her at the raven society.
Title: Flight of the Raven 21 May 2012 6:33 pm
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed) [Report This]
    This is so good. I like how everything fell together and that too a lot of work. Interesting to is the book. Such a great job with this story.
Title: Flight of the Raven 19 May 2012 1:14 am
Reviewer: SpicyKittins (Signed) [Report This]
    I say you can't have Snape kill her, not if he is to remain taking care of Harry and especially not in front of Harry. I think a combo of 2 and 3 would be good but before sticking her by Sirius have Snape and Sirius talk and explain things so Sirius can drive her crazy(er) before the dementors come lol...I hope your mom is ok
Title: Flight of the Raven 18 May 2012 7:46 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I reviewed on ffn and think that Harry will convince Severus to turn Marlene over for trial. On second thought, however, I think she should be given to the Society of Ravens to try. She betrayed them, stole a Society book, assaulted a member and killed a familiar. Perhaps the ravens have a punishment for traitors. Wandering the Gray Road without a guide could be a fearful punishment. I am also wondering about the revenant. Best of luck to you and your mother.
Title: Flight of the Raven 18 May 2012 4:28 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Kiss her crazy butt!! Better yet, put her in a cell with Bellatrix. Even better!

    I hope you mum gets better!
Title: Flight of the Raven 18 May 2012 12:12 am
Reviewer: seveituslover93 (Signed) [Report This]
    Kiss Her!! She's the devil reincarnated!!
Title: Flight of the Raven 17 May 2012 10:22 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Double thumbs up for this chapter!

    Sorry about your mum though. I hope she'll be alright!

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