| Title: Trouble at the Platform
| 27 Apr 2013 10:07 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Totally cool that the eggs have hatched! It's a wonder Skull wasn't handing out cigars... ;-) As for the boys' precarious predicament-- well, *shudders*, I sense a lot of cauldron scrubbing in their future! In the meantime, I just hope the Hogwarts Express doesn't have to go through any tunnels!
So the boys ended up taking the flying car. Severus will definately have a fit. I was glad to hear about Skull's new family. I will miss him but Shriek will need help with the babies. They can be ravenous. I have befriended/been befriended by a family of crows, smaller cousins of ravens. I'm sure they have babies now and they are waiting for me when I arrive so that they can get the peanuts and bird food that I give them. They know my car and come swooping over when I arrive in the parking lot. The adult male who I call Crow reminds me of your depiction of Skull - curious, smart and mischievous.
| Title: Trouble at the Platform
| 27 Apr 2013 3:04 am
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| Reviewer: 12reader (Anonymous)
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Oh Lord! Sev's gonna hit the roof!!! No telling how Dante's gonna handle being yelled at, much less Harry! Jeez, I hope that whatever happens doesn't cause an impassable rift between Dante and Sev!
Ok, rant's over with. I've loved how Skull gets a mate and children, that's just too cute! But they sure could've used his wisdom with that one! I'm cringing over the thought of Sev's 'displeasure'.
Great chapter! Hmm I can't help thinking that Dante would be best suited to Ravenclaw... He seems quite bright and his knowledge of American wizardy would probably help him.
| Title: Smiles and Secrets
| 03 Apr 2013 7:08 am
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| Reviewer: Me (Anonymous)
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You're breathing fresh life into the story with this Dante char. I'd been bored for a bit, but kept on because I love Skull so much. I assume Dante will be bringing the diary, then? Or is it something entirely different? You do this very well. :)
Dante would hate it but I think he is a Slytherin. Besides, with his current problems it would give him a chance to get to know Severus better. Sev and Skull would be able to keep a close eye on him, too. After Sev and Lockhart's first meeting, I am curious about whether there will be the imfamous dueling scene in a future chapter.
Great description of Snape going into the book store. Talk about a young man caught between a rock and a hard place. A stranger in a strange land and no one he is comfortable tiwth to talk to.
| Title: Meeting in Diagon Alley
| 19 Mar 2013 1:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Con Moto (Anonymous)
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Oh wow that was really interesting! I wonder who those men were, I hope Dante isn't harmed. And poor Harry, he's lucky to have had Skull with him!
Can't wait for the next chapter :D
i like indeed. The most exciting things happen in your stories Snapegirl
Oh my. Sev picked a bad day to go to Diagon Alley. I liked the way Dobbie popped up in the middle of the trip to warn Harry. Too bad he couldn't warn Harry about Lockhart though Severus' reaction was fun. I was interested to see that Dante is a powerful wizard though that seems to run in the family. From what we have heard about his father, the men that grabbed him will be trouble. Sev and Skull have their respective hands full this chapter.
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