Please do not have Lena and Snape get -together. Also she is getting a bit annoying, can you please cut her part a bit?
Author's Response: As of yet, I'm not sure what I'm doing with them. But Lena was always intended to play a good role in here since she is a librarian. What do you find annoying about her? She's hardly in this story at all thus far, except as a supporting role and I really do not want to take her out, she's important to the story as a whole and will prove a good friend to both Harry and Severus.
| Title: The Society of Ravens
| 19 Jun 2011 4:32 am
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| Reviewer: LeeRoy (Anonymous)
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Excellent. Can't wait for more
| Title: Duels and Consequences
| 09 Jun 2011 11:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Anano (Signed)
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This situation with dueling and Harry´s punishment reminds me our laws in the Czech republic. No, it´s almost the same. There you also cannot kill or harm the offender, or a burglar, if he wants to harm you or stole something from your house. If you will, prison is in order, or penalty as well. You must call the police and wait. The law is not interested, if you suffer or not. You cannot harm or take the life of other, even if you are a victim. I went crazy, when I heard about it. I don´t like it either, so I think, that this situation with Harry is very living. It is unfair, in my opinion, but it happens in real life too. Anyway, I feel sorry for Harry((.
| Title: Do Not Go Gently into That Good Night
| 07 Jun 2011 12:00 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely chapter and idea of the students sending owl house unity!
| Title: Do Not Go Gently into That Good Night
| 04 Jun 2011 4:34 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Very very sweet! I am so glad Skull made it! I loved the dialogs between Harry and Sev, they flow really well and show their relationship very clearly.
| Title: Do Not Go Gently into That Good Night
| 03 Jun 2011 8:33 pm
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| Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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Awe... Skull's on the mend. Great chapter!
| Title: The Cursed Envelope
| 21 May 2011 11:11 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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I think a Sticking charm is in order to keep you close to your computer and make sure the next chapter comes along quickly.I want to know who is doing all these nasty things.
Awwww, poor Skull! Please keep him alive-I love that bird! Awesome story-please update soon!
| Title: The Cursed Envelope
| 19 May 2011 11:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I am not bored by this story! I love Skull and hope you update soon with news of him!
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