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Title: Chapter 11: Defence against the Dark Arts 01 Aug 2015 12:28 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Harry didn't give Sirius a blow by blow description of his lessons with Snape. Sirius would not have taken it well.
Title: Chapter 11: Defence against the Dark Arts 17 Feb 2011 5:07 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Harry puts the worst spin on whatever expression or tone of voice Snape has, similar to in canon where he does the same thing.

    Author's Response: Never learns, does he, our Harry?!  Hope you're enjoying the story despite Harry's stubbornness :)
Title: Chapter 11: Defence against the Dark Arts 16 Feb 2011 5:00 am
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed) [Report This]
    " 'Snape is a teacher and I do know, at least theoretically,” he said, smirking at Hermione, “that I should do what he says, especially things like that.' ”

    That's cute. Haha. Don't we all know that. Theoretically. ;)

    Another fantastic chapter. I'm curious. How do you write so fluently, so well without being over-descriptive yet managing to describe even the tiny parts of emotions? Perhaps it's my country's exams' policy, I can't seem to write anything without being over-descriptive... sigh. makes it a bit boring, you know...

    anyway, back to the story. The part about the Dark Arts is rather nice. I love it. And Sirius somehow makes me feel angry. Haha. Harry's opinion of Snape seems to have mellowed a bit. Is anything drastic gonna happen soon that pushes both of them closer(or further *grimaces*)?

    Crossing my fingers for another chapter!

    Author's Response:

    What a lovely review!  I've been horribly sick this week (so probably not another chapter until next week) and this really perked me up :)  I don't know if my writing is anything special but I do think I might rely (perhaps too heavily) on the fully formed characters we all have in our heads thanks to JKR's great writing and so just use 'shortcuts' as it were so that it's clear what you should be seeing.  And that is either being lazy or being resourceful!  

    Thanks for reviewing :) 


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