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Author's Response: Never learns, does he, our Harry?! Hope you're enjoying the story despite Harry's stubbornness :)
That's cute. Haha. Don't we all know that. Theoretically. ;) Another fantastic chapter. I'm curious. How do you write so fluently, so well without being over-descriptive yet managing to describe even the tiny parts of emotions? Perhaps it's my country's exams' policy, I can't seem to write anything without being over-descriptive... sigh. makes it a bit boring, you know... anyway, back to the story. The part about the Dark Arts is rather nice. I love it. And Sirius somehow makes me feel angry. Haha. Harry's opinion of Snape seems to have mellowed a bit. Is anything drastic gonna happen soon that pushes both of them closer(or further *grimaces*)? Crossing my fingers for another chapter! Author's Response: What a lovely review! I've been horribly sick this week (so probably not another chapter until next week) and this really perked me up :) I don't know if my writing is anything special but I do think I might rely (perhaps too heavily) on the fully formed characters we all have in our heads thanks to JKR's great writing and so just use 'shortcuts' as it were so that it's clear what you should be seeing. And that is either being lazy or being resourceful! Thanks for reviewing :)
Author's Response: I'm pleased you're enjoying it - thank you for saying so!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
Snape's casting the Imperious on Harry! Is there any ultimate motive? Is Harry going to get Imperioed into killing his Professor? Aack! That's might be nice. It is kinda nice when the first command Snape gave him was to straighten his tie. Haha. Bet he's been eyeing it for a while before casting the curse. Excellent as ever, though I have to point out, the first two times Snape casted the Imperious, he used the incantation Imperius instead of Imperio. Any particular reason? I mean, the last time, which is also the only time he used the correct incantation when he casted it was the only time when he commanded Harry to do something utterly repulsive. Just a thought. Update soon!! Author's Response: Glad you liked the part with the Trio - their friendship is the thing I love most about the books (okay, second thing - Snape wins every time!) Really pleased you're enjoying the story, I'll try and post an update the same time next week. Thank you for pointing out my mistake with the incantation! (This is why I should really get a beta!) I've fixed it now, so thanks for helping me.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, glad you liked it!
Author's Response: Indeed!!
Author's Response: Next chapter up - with a lesson!! Let me know what you didn't understand, perhaps my writing wasn't very clear - I'm still learning :)
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