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Title: Chapter 1: A Daydream 31 Jul 2015 11:07 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a really good beginning chapter. Very imaginative. I like the idea that a product made by the twins would work that way for Harry. Snape would be horrified if he knew the Order was watching him.
Title: Chapter 11: Defence against the Dark Arts 17 Feb 2011 5:07 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Harry puts the worst spin on whatever expression or tone of voice Snape has, similar to in canon where he does the same thing.

    Author's Response: Never learns, does he, our Harry?!  Hope you're enjoying the story despite Harry's stubbornness :)
Title: Chapter 11: Defence against the Dark Arts 16 Feb 2011 5:00 am
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed) [Report This]
    " 'Snape is a teacher and I do know, at least theoretically,” he said, smirking at Hermione, “that I should do what he says, especially things like that.' ”

    That's cute. Haha. Don't we all know that. Theoretically. ;)

    Another fantastic chapter. I'm curious. How do you write so fluently, so well without being over-descriptive yet managing to describe even the tiny parts of emotions? Perhaps it's my country's exams' policy, I can't seem to write anything without being over-descriptive... sigh. makes it a bit boring, you know...

    anyway, back to the story. The part about the Dark Arts is rather nice. I love it. And Sirius somehow makes me feel angry. Haha. Harry's opinion of Snape seems to have mellowed a bit. Is anything drastic gonna happen soon that pushes both of them closer(or further *grimaces*)?

    Crossing my fingers for another chapter!

    Author's Response:

    What a lovely review!  I've been horribly sick this week (so probably not another chapter until next week) and this really perked me up :)  I don't know if my writing is anything special but I do think I might rely (perhaps too heavily) on the fully formed characters we all have in our heads thanks to JKR's great writing and so just use 'shortcuts' as it were so that it's clear what you should be seeing.  And that is either being lazy or being resourceful!  

    Thanks for reviewing :) 

Title: Chapter 10: The Imperious Curse 12 Feb 2011 8:27 pm
Reviewer: crystal (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Im enjoying this story tremendously. I will be looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: I'm pleased you're enjoying it - thank you for saying so!
Title: Chapter 10: The Imperious Curse 09 Feb 2011 9:58 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it!! Awesome chapter!! :D

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it :)
Title: Chapter 10: The Imperious Curse 09 Feb 2011 4:59 am
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed) [Report This]
    Hahaha! Nice work! I'd forgotten about the Patronus as well, but Snape remembered. Oh well. I like the tickling part, though.

    Snape's casting the Imperious on Harry! Is there any ultimate motive? Is Harry going to get Imperioed into killing his Professor? Aack! That's might be nice. It is kinda nice when the first command Snape gave him was to straighten his tie. Haha. Bet he's been eyeing it for a while before casting the curse.

    Excellent as ever, though I have to point out, the first two times Snape casted the Imperious, he used the incantation Imperius instead of Imperio. Any particular reason? I mean, the last time, which is also the only time he used the correct incantation when he casted it was the only time when he commanded Harry to do something utterly repulsive. Just a thought. Update soon!!

    Author's Response:

    Glad you liked the part with the Trio - their friendship is the thing I love most about the books (okay, second thing - Snape wins every time!)  Really pleased you're enjoying the story, I'll try and post an update the same time next week.

    Thank you for pointing out my mistake with the incantation!  (This is why I should really get a beta!)  I've fixed it now, so thanks for helping me.  

Title: Chapter 10: The Imperious Curse 09 Feb 2011 1:03 am
Reviewer: Snivilily (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! I can't wait to see how Harry improves

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading, glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 10: The Imperious Curse 08 Feb 2011 7:51 pm
Reviewer: 1reader_1writer (Signed) [Report This]
    sounds like a difficult night all the way around.

    Author's Response: Indeed!!
Title: Chapter 9: The Stag Supreme 31 Jan 2011 6:03 am
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed) [Report This]
    well, that went... surprisingly well. I meant, for Harry and Snape. Those two are like destined to fight to the death. Lol. Fabulous as ever, though there are a few tiny parts that i didn't completely understand. Update soon! I can't wait for another lesson!!

    Author's Response: Next chapter up - with a lesson!!  Let me know what you didn't understand, perhaps my writing wasn't very clear - I'm still learning :)
Title: Chapter 9: The Stag Supreme 30 Jan 2011 11:59 pm
Reviewer: LilySev777 (Signed) [Report This]
    Fabulous as always!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Next chapter up :)

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