More? Please? That was beautiful!
Title: Chapter 14: Peace, Love, and Forgiveness
| 05 Jan 2012 4:08 pm
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Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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Oh, gosh! This last scene has me practically in tears! What an intense thing to go through. Poor Harry! Poor Severus!
You really have sucked me into this story. I felt like I was right there, in that last vision. Well done!
Title: Chapter 14: Peace, Love, and Forgiveness
| 04 Jan 2012 4:48 pm
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Reviewer: Aprella (Signed)
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Aaaagh you are so evil! I grabbed my mouse, went over to the next button and then I realized there isn't one. I was sitting on the edge of my chair while reading, enjoying everything and wanting to finish the story, to know how it ends, but I have to wait!
This is such a good written story! You are so talented! I hope you will update soon, and I mean really really soon, like today or perhaps tomorrow because I can't wait to read more! You are such an evil person, keeping me, (and the other readers) waiting. I am a fan of you!
Title: Chapter 14: Peace, Love, and Forgiveness
| 04 Jan 2012 2:12 am
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Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Great chapter, and I espcially love the ending. I like how you interpreted Sev's words to Dumbledore and made them instead his declaration of his love for Lily...to Harry.
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