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Title: Remus 04 Mar 2011 12:29 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter; I love how you're developing Harry's powers and using Lupin was a clever plot device (wondering if there's going to be something there with Tonks though...) I'm really liking how Dumbledore is becoming suspicious (in the most postive meaning of the word) of the changes in Severus; it feels realistic that someone recognises the changes. Oh, and I like your development of Pomona's character ^^
Title: Remus 22 Dec 2010 9:16 am
Reviewer: elle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    that was fantastic! i think you have written severus fantastically!
Title: Remus 21 Dec 2010 12:50 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chapter loved it
Title: Remus 18 Dec 2010 7:14 pm
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    lol I love sev. I would have love to actually seen the trick he did iin his half sleep induced state...
Title: Remus 18 Dec 2010 1:17 pm
Reviewer: charlie74656 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like the way Dumbledore is consulting Severus about Harry. Great scene with him being suddenly woken as well. Can't wait to see how Harry reacts when he figures out what Remus is, but I am surprised that Remus hasn't approached Harry to introduce himself on a more personal level - or perhaps he's feeling guilty from not contacting him over the years.

    I can't believe how much you've managed to achieve plot-wise in just one term while still keeping it believable. Severus's thoughts on what happened last time and the flashbacks are perfect little teasers. Great stuff.
Title: Remus 18 Dec 2010 6:06 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    very nice.
Title: Remus 18 Dec 2010 4:52 am
Reviewer: 1reader_1writer (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying this story. I hope Harry goes to Severus to talk about Remus. that should help. And I bet Severus could finesse his way around Dumbledore if he said he was having dreams and possibly premonitions--brought on by the convergence of Voldemort and Harry, perhaps. No doubt you already know what you're going to do and I"m sure I'll love it. :)

    Great chapter.

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