Great chapter: Loved the Dobby/Harry and Albus/Harry interaction and your description of the ICW: looking forward to the next chapter
| Title: National Treasure
| 26 Jan 2011 1:49 am
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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Poor Harry feels like he is being pulled to many ways. Severus better keep his back I think he will
Excellent read; not dry at all. I really love this story and am so pleased when you update. Bravo to you and your muse for a great job!
Great chapter! Looking for the ICW and how they treat Harry. If it gets out of hand, I think Harry should just look at Dumbledor and ask to be taken home since he is the one they invited.....look forward to the next update.
| Title: National Treasure
| 19 Jan 2011 6:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Anonymous)
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I liked the details that are obviously setting things up for more intriguing action down the line. I enjoy stories like this that show that little events and decisions can have much wider ramifications and impacts, yet the characters and emotional parts are absorbing and make me care about what happens next. I'm certain that things aren't going to go quite as smoothly as people hope they will; but that's what keeps the pages turning, right? *grin*
I do sincerely hope that the council members will remember that Harry is just a boy, not a commodity over which to be bargained and fought.
I've been enjoying the tale all the way along the line and I'm sure that future chapters will more than meet the high standard you've created thus far. Well done!
I really have enjoyed your story so far. the plot is interesting and I like Severus in this.
| Title: National Treasure
| 19 Jan 2011 12:52 am
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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I am enjoying this story very much. I do have concerns that Harry would be misused by the governments because of his powers. I look forward to seeing more of this story.
| Title: National Treasure
| 18 Jan 2011 7:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Ash (Signed)
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I just love this story of yours and this Harry and Snape and everything you've built around them. I don't think this was dry at all, on the contrary, if a writer doesn't include all these bits then the world they build is that much poorer for it. Great chappy and of course, I can't wait for the next one, you do know how to stop just when we get going lol
| Title: National Treasure
| 18 Jan 2011 3:48 pm
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| Reviewer: misto713 (Anonymous)
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Great chapter :) Not much action, true, but the scene with Dobby was adorable ;) Looking forward to the next part.
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