Great chapter; the bone eating curse sounds truly terrifying- a brilliant invention. I'm glad Coral survived and I enjoyed the conversation between Dumbledore and Snape
Poor Harry. What an alarming thing to happen. I doubt Severus will be able to keep his secrets from Albus & co for much longer.
I'm really enjoying this. it's very clever :)
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| 08 Feb 2011 1:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Ash (Signed)
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I somehow end up saying oooh, after I've read your chapters. A really great one, good to see complications in Harry's path, and Severus', but nothing terrible though you did have me worried for quite a while there. I absolutely love to see fics where Severus is like this - the competent, gifted adult that emerged from that child that was so gifted, something we lacked in canon might I add. Anyway, thanks so much, am so anxious for more!
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