When reading an already finished work, I usually don't review until the end, but I just wanted to say what a great story this has been so far. While I like time travel stories and stories where Harry is sorted differently, I'm also always hesitant to read them because often they follow the original plot too closely, so they get boring. But this one doesn't fall into that trap at all. It is very engaging. And I don't think it's unrealistic at all that things are changing so much and so fast. Severus held nothing back, making major changes right off the bat, so of course there will be drastic repercussions. I look forward to reading the rest.
Wow! What a ride.
I'm so glad that Harry has someone as experienced and wise as the Flamels to help him through his dreams and visions. What a huge difference this could make.
Absolutely loved the scene at the Turner's house. WOW! Albus kicked some serious butt there. *giggles* And smart move on his part for crashing the prophecies.
Your Albus is portrayed so well that it's easy to see why he's the only man Tom fears. He's not just a doddering old grandfather trying to relive his glory days. While the scene where he stormed into the office and fought Greyback was great, this chapter was absolutely amazing! Of course, now I'm worried about Albus so I'm eagerly waiting the next chapter.
| Title: Duel of Duels
| 29 Jun 2011 11:17 pm
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| Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous)
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This is one of my most favorite stories. I get so happy when I see an update. Thank you, thank you, thank you.
Wonderful action! Thanks for the great post!
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