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Title: True Colors 29 Oct 2011 6:15 pm
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow!! What a chapter.

    I loved the image of Dumbledore playing "Operation" to help with his motor skills. Especially since the funny bone was always my least favorite one as well.

    I've been meaning to tell you for some time, thanks for keeping a sense of innocence about Albus. Some people turn his sometimes child-like attitude into a childishness, which he really wasn't.

    As for Halloween, thanks for bringing all the children together. The whole evening was written quite well. I especially like reading Severus' introspection on what he had done before compared to what he can do differently this time. It seems to open up some interesting prospects.

    YAY!! For Severus planning things out so well even through not knowing for sure if support would make it in time.

    Of course, I'm really looking forward to reading more about why Voldie's Maxima curse was so mild. Was that indeed from his magic trying so hard to fight off the infection or was there something else in play? Hmmmmm.
Title: True Colors 29 Oct 2011 5:39 pm
Reviewer: -NightRise- (Signed) [Report This]
    GREAT.......

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