| Title: Remus
| 22 Dec 2010 9:16 am
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| Reviewer: elle (Anonymous)
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that was fantastic! i think you have written severus fantastically!
| Title: Remus
| 21 Dec 2010 12:50 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good chapter loved it
lol I love sev. I would have love to actually seen the trick he did iin his half sleep induced state...
I really like the way Dumbledore is consulting Severus about Harry. Great scene with him being suddenly woken as well. Can't wait to see how Harry reacts when he figures out what Remus is, but I am surprised that Remus hasn't approached Harry to introduce himself on a more personal level - or perhaps he's feeling guilty from not contacting him over the years.
I can't believe how much you've managed to achieve plot-wise in just one term while still keeping it believable. Severus's thoughts on what happened last time and the flashbacks are perfect little teasers. Great stuff.
I'm really enjoying this story. I hope Harry goes to Severus to talk about Remus. that should help. And I bet Severus could finesse his way around Dumbledore if he said he was having dreams and possibly premonitions--brought on by the convergence of Voldemort and Harry, perhaps. No doubt you already know what you're going to do and I"m sure I'll love it. :)
Great chapter.
Sev use a ime turner! catch the rat! I love this story I look forward to the following chapters...
Great chapter. Love the idea of having a hufflepuff be Harry's school nemesis now that he's friends with Draco. Given his fame within the wizarding world, someone was bound have a go at him and I think what you've done with Smith is very believable.
Also love the idea that Severus's actions are creating ripples of effect like Scabbers/Pettigrew disappearing early. Of course he still has the knowledge and the advantage that the other side don't know what he knows, so he's still ahead of the game! Not as easy as he might have hoped, though.
Hoping for more Severus/Harry interaction soon. :)
I am so enjoying your story. It's amazing how just changing a few "little" things can change so much. When you first mentioned that Peter had disappeared, I thought that maybe Severus had already taken care of him. Now a new light on that thread. Thank you for the update and I look forward to your next one.
| Title: Backlash
| 07 Dec 2010 10:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wonderful chapter thank you
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