Great chapter; I loved how Draco reacted, it was very in character and Lucius Malfoy's conversation with Snape was really well written. Poor Harry, though.
Great chapter; the bone eating curse sounds truly terrifying- a brilliant invention. I'm glad Coral survived and I enjoyed the conversation between Dumbledore and Snape
What a cliffhanger! Loved the details of the vaccine; it's inevitable that Dumbledore would be the universal donor, isn't it lol! The scene with Harry and Remus was really sweet.
Oh... Very interesting twist! Hope the white magic isn't dangerous and doesn't cause Harry problems. Really enjoyable chapter; I liked the trick the other ministries tried to pull and how you depicted various countries attitudes towards werewolves.
Great chapter: Loved the Dobby/Harry and Albus/Harry interaction and your description of the ICW: looking forward to the next chapter
Oh, very interesting chapter; I can see why Luicus would want to get rid of Dobby- a fitting gift in the eyes of the world and a release from the embarrassment! Loved Harry's healing technique and very interested in the significance of the white magic. Despite what you said about pairings, I have to wonder about Harry and the Greengrass girls...
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| 04 Mar 2011 2:59 am
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Brilliant chapter! Loved the details about the life debt and Harry's healing of the boy was very in character. Poor professors- they'll be lucky if they manage to prise Harry away from St Mungos!
| Title: More Than Simply Similar
| 04 Mar 2011 2:43 am
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Great chapter; given Harry's healing abilities, I rather guessed him curing (or at least attempting to cure) Neville's parents was in the offing! Very interesting about the twin wands and I'm curious as to what is going to happen about the party... (Oh, and the conversation between Remus and Severus was good too; poor Severus, it's a hell of an ethical dilemma!)
Great chapter; I love how you're developing Harry's powers and using Lupin was a clever plot device (wondering if there's going to be something there with Tonks though...) I'm really liking how Dumbledore is becoming suspicious (in the most postive meaning of the word) of the changes in Severus; it feels realistic that someone recognises the changes. Oh, and I like your development of Pomona's character ^^
Aw, poor Severus; pettigrew's dissapearance has something to do with Quirrell, I'm sure of it. Looking forward to finding out. Zack Smith seems to have taken the place of Draco, he's a good choice, better than Draco actually.
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