Very exciting chapter. I had begun to think that Smith was the one possessed. I forgot completely about Pettigrew. And poor Severus. Good stuff.
Very exciting chapter. I had begun to think that Smith was the one possessed. I forgot completely about Pettigrew. And poor Severus. Good stuff.
I love this story. I do a little happy dance everytime I see an update.
*squawks* You are entirely too good at getting me hanging on the edge of my seat, then POOF!
Please, update soon!
Oh, I do like this story. Seeing updates makes my day.
(Keeps fingers crossed that you haven't damaged Severus beyond repair.)
Good chapter. I wonder if this means Harry has somehow healed himself? It does point a finger at Smith, of course, and possibly his family.
OOOOO! make sure to pulverize that Smith. Just let Coral at him, or Snape for that matter. He had better not just get a slap on the wrist for this!
I enjoyed the chapter. Looking forward to the next.
V.
I hope that rotten bugger gets expelled...or at least suspended. He needs a good kick, too. :)
| Title: A New Beginning
| 18 Feb 2011 10:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Black Knife Fish (Anonymous)
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I found this story on ffnet. I was hooked after this paragraph:
"Time travel of this scale demands a high concentration of magic. Very high. The amount only a fully grown and awakened Mage could give. And so, Harry had drained his core into the rune network and provided all of the power needed to send Severus' soul back. The potions master swallowed. In the end, to give a new beginning, Harry had given his life."
I loved how these sentences give such a clear understanding of the cost and of what is at stake here. They also show how incredibly far Severus has moved past any petty grudges. He is there for a purpose - on a mission - and he must succeed.
This is a really unique take on all our familiar characters. It is intriguing to consider how lives can be altered through one person's love and assistance.
Thank you for writing this! I am excited to read more.
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