Poor Harry. What an alarming thing to happen. I doubt Severus will be able to keep his secrets from Albus & co for much longer.
I'm really enjoying this. it's very clever :)
| Title: Assault
| 08 Feb 2011 1:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Ash (Signed)
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I somehow end up saying oooh, after I've read your chapters. A really great one, good to see complications in Harry's path, and Severus', but nothing terrible though you did have me worried for quite a while there. I absolutely love to see fics where Severus is like this - the competent, gifted adult that emerged from that child that was so gifted, something we lacked in canon might I add. Anyway, thanks so much, am so anxious for more!
AHH!!! That's such a MEAN cliffie!!! Please update soon! Coral has to be okay! D:
| Title: White Magic
| 04 Feb 2011 12:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Claris (Anonymous)
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What a cliffie! Really enjoying where you're taking this story.
Just a note on blood donation. People don't get paid (in the UK anyway) for donating blood. They volunteer to do it to help others.
Oh my god!
How can you stop right there???
Evil, torturous!
Great story so far, I read it in one go!
Awesome!
Thumbs up!
Can't wait for the next chapter...
Poor Harry! I hope Coral is alright. :(
Great chapter, but evil cliffie!!
Ooh, dramatic! The werewolf healing thing is feeling a little pointless and directionless - but I suppose you were leading up to this, to Harry being attacked. Anyway, still interested, but I want more Harry and less side plot. :P
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