Yikes, that's a lot of points from Gryffindor. I wish Harry wouldn't be so bullheaded and just ask for help, but I imagine that abuse also does quite a number on one's head, as well. :(
Potions everyday?
I am curious Snape did't send him to M. Pomfrey
Fabulous chapter. i think it's just the perfect length. :)
And the plot thickens.
I'm enjoying this story very much so far, but the head hopping, where you switch POVs mid-scene are very distracting. You might wanna look narrative voice and consider that aspect.
But technicalities aside, I'm loving this storyline. Can't wait to see what Snape is going to do about this poor boy's insomnia!
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Awwww, poor Harry! He's definitely tired and hurting. I love it. :)
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