| Title: Worries and Wondering
| 09 Dec 2020 2:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
more more please!
Author's Response: Oh more will come ... :) Thanks for reviewing.
| Title: Worries and Wondering
| 02 Jan 2011 2:14 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Fabulous!!! i loved this chapter and the development of the story. It is very original, both in the main plot, but also in the day to day things in the chapter. Well done! I loved the heart to heart moment between Harry and Snape in this chapter. It does make me wonder about all of the other characters, how much of them are real... is Snape really real? If he is real, is he in a coma too? Is his dream self also there? It is all very interesting. Great job! Thanks for the update!
I want you to know that I also finished editing the formatting and quotations of all the chapters of this story, like we discussed before. Please look over them. :)
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks, I had started to switch over a few the other night, I finally got some time to do it. Thank you sooo much! My next story I'll write with double quotations ...
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