| Title: Crossing the Ocean
| 09 Dec 2020 2:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an emotional chapter
| Title: Crossing the Ocean
| 11 Jan 2011 12:04 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter and sad about Draco but he and Harry did have a chance to reconcile
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Omg loved it. It was so sad, Snape and His parents waving them off and how Draco was dead. I was nearly bawling at that stage. Can't wait for the next chapter and relieved this isn't the last. Well done :)
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I guess it was sad eh? Anyway, thank you for reviewing!
nice chapter but there are parts that repeat 3 times...whole sections. Just thought you wanted to know there was a formatting error. Loved this line: "Where you go I cannot follow," Severus told him gently. "I will be alright, the danger is all in your mind, it can not truly hurt me."" That was the best line in the chapter, great job!
Author's Response: Oops, sorry about that. Oh, you might want to read it again, mainly because I changed the ending last minute!
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