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Title: A Midnight Adventure 09 Dec 2010 6:25 am
Reviewer: Perry (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting story! Is Harry stuck in a dream or something? Please update soon! :)

    Author's Response:

    Giggle, I can't tell you if Harry is or isn't now can I! Don't worry, an update will come soon. I have quite a few chapters written in advance.

     

Title: Questions Without Answers 06 Dec 2010 9:49 pm
Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oooooh, intriguing! Keep writing. I'm dying to know what happens next.
Title: Questions Without Answers 06 Dec 2010 5:27 pm
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, this is mystery. I'm curious what is with Harry and why Snape can't tell him.
    I'm looking forward the next chapter, hopefully it will answer some of these questions...
    Update soon, please! =o)
Title: Questions Without Answers 06 Dec 2010 5:02 am
Reviewer: Daffodil (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hehe, the thought of Snape with pink hair is really funny! Great chapter, hope you update soon!
Title: If Memory Serves 06 Dec 2010 4:50 am
Reviewer: Daffodil (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oooh, really great beginning! I can't wait to see what's wrong with Harry, and what Snape has to do with it!
Title: If Memory Serves 05 Dec 2010 8:02 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Ouuuuu... I love it! Fantastic beginning. I am intrigued!!
Title: If Memory Serves 04 Dec 2010 8:57 pm
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Sounds interesting! I think I could really enjoy this! And yes, I agree. Pity from Snape is not a good thing. Not at all.

    I wonder what could be the matter with Harry?

    Looking forward to your next update. :-)
Title: If Memory Serves 04 Dec 2010 3:41 pm
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting start.
    I'm curious what is with Harry...I hope he will be ok.
Title: If Memory Serves 04 Dec 2010 3:26 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, you certainly have my curiosity piqued! I am wondering whether everything in this chapter is really happening and Harry's been hit by a curse or been poisoned or if this is all essentially a figment of his imagination (either from dreaming, or being the effects of a curse or poison, etc). In either case, things certainly don't look good for our hero.

    You have a nice writing style and the characterizations are quite good. Yes, you had a lot of things going on in this chapter but it didn't feel like it was crammed in with a shoe horn. You made efficient use of the length without resorting to dropping anvils to get the clues across to the reader. And bless you for not falling into the laundry list/unnecessary use of excessive adjectives form of descriptions. I had no trouble identifying time, place, what the characters were feeling. Your style here is eminently readable. Bravo!

    I'm really looking forward to the upcoming chapters.

    Author's Response: Ooh, I'm liking the theories. Glad you liked it!
Title: If Memory Serves 04 Dec 2010 2:42 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Boy, I am thinking that Voldie is playing with Harry's mind.

    Looking forward to more

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