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Reviews For Somnum Aeternum
Author's Response: Giggle, I can't tell you if Harry is or isn't now can I! Don't worry, an update will come soon. I have quite a few chapters written in advance.
I'm looking forward the next chapter, hopefully it will answer some of these questions... Update soon, please! =o)
I wonder what could be the matter with Harry? Looking forward to your next update. :-)
I'm curious what is with Harry...I hope he will be ok.
You have a nice writing style and the characterizations are quite good. Yes, you had a lot of things going on in this chapter but it didn't feel like it was crammed in with a shoe horn. You made efficient use of the length without resorting to dropping anvils to get the clues across to the reader. And bless you for not falling into the laundry list/unnecessary use of excessive adjectives form of descriptions. I had no trouble identifying time, place, what the characters were feeling. Your style here is eminently readable. Bravo! I'm really looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Author's Response: Ooh, I'm liking the theories. Glad you liked it!
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