Cool, update soon, I like it... I hope it comes down to a fight between Wise and Icefyre... that should be cool
I am enjoying this story very much, I like that Snape takes instruction instead of always being the instructor. What will happen when they wake up and are sleeping next to each other.
Title: Tale of a Basilisk
| 16 Dec 2010 11:48 am
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Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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Wonderful chapter. I really liked how the Wise One helped Severus succeed in making Harry well. Beautiful scenery as she goes out to hunt as well - love the sparkling diamonds similie for the snow beneath the moonlight as well as how she glowed with the brightness of a thousand suns. You are building quite a fascinating fantasy.
Title: Tale of a Basilisk
| 16 Dec 2010 6:51 am
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Reviewer: Aeryun (Signed)
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Very interesting chapter. :D
I hope your ankle heals nicely. *hugs*
Title: Tale of a Basilisk
| 16 Dec 2010 6:37 am
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Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous)
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Good chapter! The image of the Wise One smashing a hole in the snow with her nose is pretty neat. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, I got that image from reading Rudyard Kipling's The Jungle Book, where Kaa the rock python breaks down the wall of the Monkey City to save Mowgli. That was the first book I ever read where a snake was portrayed as a good guy.
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