This is a really, really good fic (one of my favorites in fact) but there are a few discrepancies that I've noticed. How was Ginny kidnapped in Diagon Ally, without anyone knowing? A missing kid of a ministry worker, particularly for such a small society with few children would be very difficult to keep quiet. And how did Crouch Jr meet up with Voldie? He didn't break the imperious curse until the Quidich world cup in book four. How did Belatrix escape Azkaban, when in the books she only managed that after Voldie was resurrected with his help? I'm confused. Mind you, none of those have much to do with the actual plot, but they leave holes none the less.
| Title: Slytherin's Voice
| 15 Jan 2011 11:26 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Nice work Icefyre! Also made a change to see all the dragon taming Charlie does finally come in useful.
Oh yes! I loved how Icefyre thrashed them all! Yay! And how Charlie came and helped out. Will he tell anyone about the basilisk?
But is Moldyshorts "really" dead or just defeated again?
Nice end to Bella, Crouch & Nagini
| Title: Slytherin's Voice
| 13 Jan 2011 8:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wonderful action chapter thank you. Loved Charlie on his dragon can he come back into the story?
| Title: Slytherin's Voice
| 13 Jan 2011 6:52 pm
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Great chapter! I loved Icefyre's revenge and Charlie's role in it. I hope Icefyre goes back safe to Harry, Sev and Dumbledore's protection!
Hahaha, totally loved the "Besides, he was hungry."
Somewhat a comical effect.
lol Wow I thoughht charlie might have hurt Icefyre I am glad he didn't.
| Title: Slytherin's Voice
| 13 Jan 2011 5:26 am
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Well, that was interesting. Kudos on a well written chapter.
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