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Title: Tale of a Basilisk 16 Dec 2010 9:09 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter. I really liked how the Wise One helped Severus succeed in making Harry well. Beautiful scenery as she goes out to hunt as well - love the sparkling diamonds similie for the snow beneath the moonlight as well as how she glowed with the brightness of a thousand suns. You are building quite a fascinating fantasy.
Title: Tale of a Basilisk 16 Dec 2010 6:51 am
Reviewer: Aeryun (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting chapter. :D

    I hope your ankle heals nicely. *hugs*
Title: Tale of a Basilisk 16 Dec 2010 6:37 am
Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter! The image of the Wise One smashing a hole in the snow with her nose is pretty neat. :)

    Author's Response: Thanks, I got that image from reading Rudyard Kipling's  The Jungle Book, where Kaa the rock python breaks down the wall of the Monkey City to save Mowgli.  That was the first book I ever read where a snake was portrayed as a good guy.
Title: Tell Me No Lies 14 Dec 2010 7:00 pm
Reviewer: Perry (Signed) [Report This]
    Another chapter! I hope Harry decides to trust Snape soon. I think things between them are progressing realistically though. Very nice job :)

    Author's Response: Thanks. Harry's trust will eventually come. Just posted again and in the next chapter you should notice something about Harry's dreams. Subconsciously, he does trust Snape.
Title: Tell Me No Lies 14 Dec 2010 3:57 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    excellent so far, i love the plot and the chapters are very well written. Please update soon thanks :)

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! Another chapter is up now!
Title: Tell Me No Lies 14 Dec 2010 3:50 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this story, especially as you are so good at depicting three-dimensional characters and write such natural sounding dialog. I look forward to reading more.

    I love The Wise One. I hope that Harry will talk to her about things. I keep thinking that if he would only slip up and say something like "I can't tell anyone, Dumbledore says I have to go back every year!" then Sev could do something about the situation. Of course, Harry would need to talk about the details eventually, to
    help him heal. Unfortunately, he is only a kid still and seems to think he has only two choices: stay nothing at all or to tell every last detail. I'm sure, however that between the Ruffled Serpent and Sev, things will be sorted out.

    I hope your ankle gets better soon (been there, done that, have been trying to return the t-shirt ever since) and you have a Happy Christmas and New Year.

    Author's Response:

    Ah that slipup is coming in the next chapter! So keep reading!

    Yes, unfortunately that's how it is with a lot of abused kids, they have major trust issues (and no wonder), and tend to believe it's all or nothing. The Wise One will give Harry some good advice, however.

    Thanks, one of the reasons my ankle is in such bad shape is the multiple tears and sprains it has had, plus my FM does not help anything.

    Next chapter is up!

Title: Tell Me No Lies 14 Dec 2010 3:06 pm
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very nice chapter =o) I'm looking forward the next one, hopefully you update soon =o)

    Author's Response: Thanks very much! I have just updated!
Title: Tell Me No Lies 14 Dec 2010 2:01 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Another amazing chapter, but will Severus actually tell Harry the whole truth?

    Author's Response: Well, that all depends on whether he feels comfortable trusting Harry. He's been damaged too and doesn't trust easily either.
Title: Tell Me No Lies 14 Dec 2010 10:05 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this chapter and like how Harry and Severus are getting along. There are still some hurdles to overcome which is nice. I am very much looking forward to reading more.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you're enjoying my story!
Title: Tell Me No Lies 14 Dec 2010 8:21 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I enjoyed reading the wise one's conversations. You have given her a very gentle presence and I love it. Though the mischief from Harry seems a bit out of character.

    Hope your ankle gets better soon. I will look forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, and you'll get to see more of her in upcoming chapters. 

    Harry isn't normally mischievous, but in this chapter he probably felt so good about being alive and not a popsicle that he just had to express himself somehow. So he tickled Severus, just like a typical boy would.  I think harry often acts older than his age because of the way he was forced to grow up, so I like him to act like a child every once in awhile.


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