Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For Nightmares
Title: Chapter 5 10 Jan 2011 3:16 pm
Reviewer: nad (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, that was an emotional rollercoaster. Fear for Harry and Snape when Harry got lost, relief when 'Miss Roslyn' found Harry, amusement at Dumbledore's matchmaking attempts and lightheartedness at the sweetness of it all. :)

    And I so totally caught the Twilight references okay! :D

    Nice job! Me wants a sequel!
Title: Chapter 4 10 Jan 2011 3:04 pm
Reviewer: nad (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Your characterisations are spot on in this chapter. :)

    And do I sense a little romance blooming in the future for Snape?

    Continue to read, I shall!
Title: Chapter 3 10 Jan 2011 2:53 pm
Reviewer: nad (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Can I just say that Little Harry is so super cute? Haha no wonder he can warm Snape's cold-as-a-dungeon heart so easily. :)
Title: Chapter 2 10 Jan 2011 2:45 pm
Reviewer: nad (Anonymous) [Report This]
    DADDYYYYYYYYY!!! Can you say AWWWWWWWW? Haha man I'm only 2 chapters in and already totally hooked. :)
Title: Chapter 1 10 Jan 2011 2:40 pm
Reviewer: nad (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww it's so heartwarming to imagine Snape as a father figure, albeit in his own Snape-like way.

    And I love the way you write. It really pulls me in into the story. :)
Title: Chapter 5 10 Jan 2011 9:00 am
Reviewer: 1reader_1writer (Signed) [Report This]
    That Dumbledore. It was his fault holding Severus there while he prattled. I hate meddlers.

    I like the story a lot. I do notice, though, that sometimes Harry seems much younger than nine. I have to go back and check now and then to assure myself that it's the age you meant it to be. At one point in the story, I thought you had that he was seven, which does seem more the age he acts, but a few lines later he was clearly stated to be nine.

    Either way, I'd love to read the sequel if you choose to write it. :)

    Author's Response:

    Agree about Dumbledore, hahaha...

    Victims of child abusers tend to be less mature, I would think. The story started out with seven, but I changed everything to nine later. While Harry may act like seven, the way he expresses himself through words tend to an older age...

     Thank you for reviewing, I really appreciate it.

Title: Chapter 5 10 Jan 2011 1:08 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    his Is so sweat I love it I hope to see more soon!

    Author's Response:

    Who's sweet? Severus or Harry? Hahaha...

    I do hope you're talking about Harry because I hear Severus growling in the background...

    Thank you for the lovely review!

Title: Chapter 5 10 Jan 2011 12:48 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    I would not mind seeing a sequel to this. Love the whole thing. Looking forward to more. Update soon :D

    Author's Response:

    There'll be one more chapter and then I'll go into retreat while I plan for the sequel:D

    Thank you for the support and the reviews, I really appreciate it.

Title: Chapter 5 10 Jan 2011 12:24 am
Reviewer: Kayla Anne (Signed) [Report This]
    I am, I am, I am! Sequels rock.
    Wonderful story! Can't wait for the next part!

    Author's Response:

    Why thank you, but I'm afraid you'll have to wait much longer for a sequel, like, 11 months...sorry...needs some planning time :D

    Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 5 10 Jan 2011 12:23 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very sweet story! I love Severus' and Harry's interactions and how Severus softened up so towards Harry. I especially loved the end when Harry said his favorite time of day was when he woke and realized that living with Severus was true and not a dream. I mean, how can you get any more heart-warming than that?

    A sequel sounds like a wonderful idea!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the support, but sequel's coming up in 11 plus months time...

    Thanks a lot for the review though, I really appreciate it!


Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.5