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Reviews For Nightmares
And I so totally caught the Twilight references okay! :D Nice job! Me wants a sequel!
And do I sense a little romance blooming in the future for Snape? Continue to read, I shall!
And I love the way you write. It really pulls me in into the story. :)
I like the story a lot. I do notice, though, that sometimes Harry seems much younger than nine. I have to go back and check now and then to assure myself that it's the age you meant it to be. At one point in the story, I thought you had that he was seven, which does seem more the age he acts, but a few lines later he was clearly stated to be nine. Either way, I'd love to read the sequel if you choose to write it. :) Author's Response: Agree about Dumbledore, hahaha... Victims of child abusers tend to be less mature, I would think. The story started out with seven, but I changed everything to nine later. While Harry may act like seven, the way he expresses himself through words tend to an older age... Thank you for reviewing, I really appreciate it.
Author's Response: Who's sweet? Severus or Harry? Hahaha... I do hope you're talking about Harry because I hear Severus growling in the background... Thank you for the lovely review!
Author's Response: There'll be one more chapter and then I'll go into retreat while I plan for the sequel:D Thank you for the support and the reviews, I really appreciate it.
Wonderful story! Can't wait for the next part! Author's Response: Why thank you, but I'm afraid you'll have to wait much longer for a sequel, like, 11 months...sorry...needs some planning time :D Thanks for reviewing!
A sequel sounds like a wonderful idea! Author's Response: Thank you for the support, but sequel's coming up in 11 plus months time... Thanks a lot for the review though, I really appreciate it! |
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