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Reviews For Flat Mate Wanted
Title: The Advertisement 16 Dec 2010 4:13 pm
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed) [Report This]
    You should get this beta-ed, it would be a much better story...I like the plot so far, but grammar is pretty important in a fanfic

    Author's Response: As I told the review who agreed with you, I have no clue about how to get a beta. I'm new on this site. Thank you and I will try to watch my grammer while I am typing.
Title: The Advertisement 16 Dec 2010 4:10 am
Reviewer: Amylia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hey, your story is intriguing - I hope you keep writing on it.

    I'm a bit of grammar-nut, though, and I'm noticing a few mistakes throughout - if you like, I could read over the whole thing as you are writing it and make some suggestions for you.

    Just let me know, I can easily be found (most nights) in the Potions and Snitches chat room (http://www.potionsandsnitches.net/chat/) ... :)

    Amylia

    Author's Response: I would like that very much. Thank you. I usually write right on the site though. Would that be a problem?
Title: The Advertisement 15 Dec 2010 4:13 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice. I like this. Can't wait to see what happens next :D

    Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it too.

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