I read this long ago, but am back now to leave some reviews. I’m looking forward to reading this again. What an action-packed opening chapter!
VERY well done. One thing: (if it's a British spelling, then that's something else), but the word "prophecy" ends in'-cy', not '-sy', so it should be corrected. Otherwise, a perfect chapter. Thanks for all your work--it's appreciated.
| Title: First Moment of Impact
| 28 Dec 2010 9:11 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Characterisation seems good - I think I'm going to enjoy this.
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