Amazing chapter. I loved Dumbledore’s words to Harry. Very fitting.
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| 27 May 2021 4:21 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Oh yeah you'll Just give him severus like we're talking about a pair of socks
Lovely! I'm very much enjoying this!
| Title: The Elephant in the Room
| 14 Jan 2011 10:42 am
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| Reviewer: Claris (Anonymous)
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Just discovered this story. Brilliant. The descriptions of occlumency are so good and I like how you've ended this chapter.
If you want to make it more authentic, change the name of the newspaper at the beginning of the story from Surrey Sun to Surrey Advertiser. Locals call it the Surrey Ad for short. That's the paper the Dursleys would read.
| Title: The Elephant in the Room
| 13 Jan 2011 7:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely lot of emotion without getting too slushy thank you for an excellent story it gets better and better
I've just stumbled across this one and don't know how I managed to miss it before.
This is a really interesting mentor Snape fiction and I like how you have portrayed both of the main characters. Severus is capable and trying his best, which Harry can see and so it's not surprising that he starts trusting Snape.
Anyway, really enjoying it, looking forward to the next instalment!
hmm sad But very well done at the same time.
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