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Title: St Mungo's 06 Oct 2022 2:47 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter. I love the medical detailing in this way.
Title: St Mungo's 28 May 2021 12:11 am
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    I apologize if I've read this and reviewed already... had a thought about Harry's empathy... isn't it possible that he could share his emotions with snape like he's been feeling snapes? So like when snape is being tortured, harry could occlude for both of them... then again, snape already knows how
Title: St Mungo's 14 Mar 2011 7:36 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Basil Fawlty! I love it! Just goes to show that Snape's sense of humor is even broader than anyone would ever expect! Wow-- this chapter really captures the tension inherent in any medical exam. Excellent job, especially in pulling together everything that poor Harry has suffered in just ONE of his extremeties! Hope they WILL be able to fix him...
Title: St Mungo's 05 Mar 2011 7:43 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice that Mrs Weasley turned up to support Harry, and that Snape didn't just deliver him and leave.
Title: St Mungo's 03 Mar 2011 8:39 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought Wormtail took blood from Harry's left arm?
Title: St Mungo's 02 Mar 2011 12:48 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    I have to admit that I've been one of those awful people who have read and enjoyed your story but had not yet left a review.

    I'm really enjoying the character development you've managed to put into Harry and Severus without making it feel forced or completely out of character.

    In addition, I've had quite a few laugh out loud moments including one you tried to slip in this chapter. Basil Fawlty? Way too funny! And of course Severus would recognize the reference. I would imagine that Cleese and his gang would be right up the Potion Master's alley, so to speak.

    Thanks so very much for sharing your story with us. I will try to be better about reviewing.
Title: St Mungo's 02 Mar 2011 12:20 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Really good chapter blending past books with your world thank you
Title: St Mungo's 27 Feb 2011 6:01 am
Reviewer: Showers (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Write! Keep writing! I want to see how your story continues to develop.
Title: St Mungo's 26 Feb 2011 10:14 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    It was nice to see Mrs Weasley there for Harry as well this chapter :)
Title: St Mungo's 26 Feb 2011 4:41 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Poor Harry.

    That damned Voldie, Umbridge, Lockhart. It never ends for Harry.


    I'm so glad that Snape is always faithfully by Harry's side though.

    Great chappie.

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